Перевірте будь ласка текст і вкажіть на помилки! Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student of the school №75 in Lviv. This letter is regarding the competition. I am writing to tell you why impressed me the story Katheryn Winnick and why I want take part in this competition. I would like to take part in the competition of Canadian-Ukrainian organization O.W.L. because in my mind it will give me nice knowledge of English. I will be interested to meet with Ukrainian beyond the our country. Learn about their life in Canada. Find new friends who live overseas. I will be interested to see Canadian cities and cultural heritage of this country. I selected Katheryn Winnick because she does not eschews of origin and at every opportunity emphasizes that she is Ukrainian. I watched a movie with her participation and I like her acting skills. It interested me as an individual and I decided to explore her life. I look forward to answer. Your faithfully,

Вопрос школьника по предмету Английский язык

Перевірте будь ласка текст і вкажіть на помилки!

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of the school №75 in Lviv. This letter is regarding the competition. I am writing to tell you why impressed me the story Katheryn Winnick and why I want take part in this competition.
I would like to take part in the competition of Canadian-Ukrainian organization O.W.L. because in my mind it will give me nice knowledge of English. I will be interested to meet with Ukrainian beyond the our country. Learn about their life in Canada. Find new friends who live overseas. I will be interested to see Canadian cities and cultural heritage of this country.
I selected Katheryn Winnick because she does not eschews of origin and at every opportunity emphasizes that she is Ukrainian. I watched a movie with her participation and I like her acting skills. It interested me as an individual and I decided to explore her life.
I look forward to answer.
Your faithfully,

Ответ учителя по предмету Английский язык

regarding TO the

why I am impressed with Katheryn Winnick’s story 

I want TO take part 

TO my mind,it will give me some knowledge of English. 

I WOULD LIKE to meet UkrainianS beyond our country,to learn about their life in Canada, TO find new friends who live overseas( abroad)

 I WOULD LIKE to see 

I selected -I CHOSE
she isn`t ashamed of her national background and she emphasizes that she is Ukrainian 
at the first (the earliest)opportunity

She is interesting as an individual and I decided to turn onto her life.

I am looking forward to your answer.